SheriffBenson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the ring, what if?]

eh

I like the sketchy style you did, but the animation could use a bit of work. Also no sound = bad. At least have something in there.

The loading bar is kind of messed up too, it goes way beyond the box. You may wanna fix that.

Cute idea, but not a super-duper submission. Keep on truckin though bro.

[Calderbank]

nice

That was pretty nice dude. The sound was excellent, and I like that song. Did you do it yourself?

I dig the style to it too. And Calderbank's voice was very funny. Nice job!

EdibleCastle responds:

yeah the song was one of mine. thanks for enjoying.

[Christmas]

great idea

I really like the idea for this piece - I'd like to see more! The humor was great and we need more humor like that on teh interweb.

However like other people have said the sound quality was really bad w/ the breathing and popping and all. And the drawings weren't so hot; maybe try not to optimize them so much, or draw them bigger and shrink them so any mistakes seem smaller and hardly noticable.

But yeah - I think you should do more of these, just polish up the surface a bit - can't wait to see more! Nice job.

[Clam by the bus]

short and sweet

You know, it was good for what it was. Although it is very short as other people pointed out, for its length it was fun. Sometimes simplicity is best :)

I thought the higher frame rate worked very well for this, and the more minimal, detailed animations added a lot to it. The shading seemed a bit overboard, so maybe lay off that a bit next time.

Don't let the overall score of this review get you down - it was very good, but when scored on the same scale as the many lengthier cartoons on here, that is only fair. So basically the biggest improvement for next time that I can tell ya is lengthen it, enrich it with maybe a real story. Good for what it was though - short and sweet! Keep it up :)